love..uuh...far away from me...
let me see...
if i can speak the truth...
i am actually not even worth it...
for all my mistakes,
what i deserve
is not someone's presence
but only grief.
kept strolling in those lanes,
never thought to make a change
i always had the perfect conceit
the arrogance getting stronger everyday.
i would live to work
and work to live
this was the only idea
i ever believed in.
concrete thoughts
clear views
life was perfect,
atleast i guessed it so.
and life went on
lifelessly
sun did shine
gloomily
but there it was
a loophole left
one stone left unturned
and we met.
time went by,
and i never tried
'cause i thought i was happy
with all that i had.
i was stubborn
with all those thoughts
that love dosent exist
its just an idea of the intellect.
how could i miss this
how can i be so blind
to feel and not see
that you are always here with me.
and it happend so
as the saying goes
'love happens
when you least expect it to'
i FINALLY fell,
but didnt realise
that you are the one
i always wished for life.
love...hmm...is here with me..
let me see...
if i can speak the truth..
i am actually in love with with you... :)
6 comments:
U must b sumthg gal..
again ur wrds make m jealous of da u luv.. really he is a lucky 1..
u r a good writer(if al ths is ur own wrds..;)
keep it up..
I like this one a lot.Loved the way poem undergoes a transition phase, the self realization associated with it and the "accepting the fact" approach were to me the strength of this poem.But then a poet must not be so candid.If read carefully it can reveal lot many things.All in all it was a good one.Enjoyed it :)
"that love dosent exist
its just an idea of the intellect."
awesome line.... resonating what i think right now...
am a novice in this field,have no experience,so i would take your word for it Sneha...
:)
and wonderfully written....
hope i see your fairy tale... when most around me are crumbling ... i hope your story ...gives hope to many of us .... and i still wonder how you can rhyme stuff so well...
kudos....
Hi Sneha,
Simple Awesome.Some feeling can not be expressed. But your try to put the feeling into word is admirable.
Thanks.
Keep writting
Your sing-song way of writing is quite brilliant. I especially liked the last two blocks..
Keep up the good work :)
Nice post. thank you.
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